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JAS_Photo
06-23-2014, 03:57 AM
https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3890/14485819022_3b28e135fe_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/o54Bjo)

The Bow (https://flic.kr/p/o54Bjo) by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography (https://www.flickr.com/people//), on Flickr

Marko
06-23-2014, 08:43 AM
Interesting comp - my eye like the shapes. I think I might correct the lines on the Bow on the left side if this were mine.

JAS_Photo
06-23-2014, 11:01 AM
Thanks, MarKo! It was kind of a one off while waiting for the light. Here is a bit of a re-edit. I did not want to lose too much of the photo. What do you think?

https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5154/14487874582_540133a46c_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/o5f9n5)

Chasing the bow edit-2 (https://flic.kr/p/o5f9n5) by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography (https://www.flickr.com/people//), on Flickr

Hillbillygirl
07-13-2014, 07:39 PM
Interesting comp JAS, and my choice is first one.

Lorey
07-13-2014, 07:43 PM
Cool! Great lines! I like it.

asnow
07-16-2014, 11:34 AM
I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.

Runmonty
07-21-2014, 08:15 PM
I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.

I quite like the traffic light bar. It emphasises the angles and lines in an urban environment, and repeats the lines on the left face of the building.