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Chasing the Bow

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    Interesting comp - my eye like the shapes. I think I might correct the lines on the Bow on the left side if this were mine.
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    Thanks, MarKo! It was kind of a one off while waiting for the light. Here is a bit of a re-edit. I did not want to lose too much of the photo. What do you think?



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    Interesting comp JAS, and my choice is first one.
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    Cool! Great lines! I like it.
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    I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.

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    Quote Originally Posted by asnow View Post
    I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.
    I quite like the traffic light bar. It emphasises the angles and lines in an urban environment, and repeats the lines on the left face of the building.
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