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10-05-2014, 02:30 AM
https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2947/15421185266_67e280bfa0_o.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/puHB7A)Select your track (https://flic.kr/p/puHB7A) by Enrique Waizel (https://www.flickr.com/people/77821403@N02/), on Flickr

10-05-2014, 08:35 AM
Really liking the curves and light on the curves and the BW here.
Top left though... looks distracting to me. (It's a different secondary linear pattern that is trying to steal my attention from the fabulous curves - the main pattern and focal point)
- I'd probably burn the top left way down.

10-07-2014, 12:33 AM
New version

https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2947/15421185266_2dbc275170_o.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/puHB7A)Select your track (https://flic.kr/p/puHB7A) by Enrique Waizel (https://www.flickr.com/people/77821403@N02/), on Flickr

10-07-2014, 04:58 AM
Cool shot. I didn't mind the first one, but do prefer the second. B & W works well.

10-07-2014, 03:39 PM
This version is much stronger to my eye - curious to know if you agree Enrique?

10-08-2014, 09:13 PM
I too really like the curves and light. I also prefer the second post with Marko's suggestion.

10-08-2014, 10:22 PM
Totally happy to receive feedback. It is an honor to have your attention; at the end, that's the never ending learning process.