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    Really liking the curves and light on the curves and the BW here.
    Top left though... looks distracting to me. (It's a different secondary linear pattern that is trying to steal my attention from the fabulous curves - the main pattern and focal point)
    - I'd probably burn the top left way down.
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    New version

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    Cool shot. I didn't mind the first one, but do prefer the second. B & W works well.
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    This version is much stronger to my eye - curious to know if you agree Enrique?
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    I too really like the curves and light. I also prefer the second post with Marko's suggestion.

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    Totally happy to receive feedback. It is an honor to have your attention; at the end, that's the never ending learning process.

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