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casil403
03-16-2009, 04:24 PM
here's another go at it...

JAS_Photo
03-16-2009, 04:37 PM
I really like the colors and the diagonal composition.

Mad Aussie
03-16-2009, 09:51 PM
Nice vibrant looking photo with those colurs there Casil!

I think you almost got the comspition just right. But not quite. I think pushing the main flower slightly off centre to the left of frame so that that the background flower wasn't cropped off would have been a bit better. Also would have included just a little more at the bottom of the frame too.

Those adjustments would have created a full diagonal of interest from the the bottom left corner through to the top right corner.

But as is it's nice and the colour combination is certainly almost luminescent.