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...and some freesia

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    I really like the colors and the diagonal composition.

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    Nice vibrant looking photo with those colurs there Casil!

    I think you almost got the comspition just right. But not quite. I think pushing the main flower slightly off centre to the left of frame so that that the background flower wasn't cropped off would have been a bit better. Also would have included just a little more at the bottom of the frame too.

    Those adjustments would have created a full diagonal of interest from the the bottom left corner through to the top right corner.

    But as is it's nice and the colour combination is certainly almost luminescent.

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