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Barefoot
06-11-2009, 04:38 PM
Sorta at a loss as to what to call this one. Heck, I can’t even tell if it’s a keeper or not.

Any suggestions?


http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg229/BarefootImages/Risized%20Images/DSC_8026rcopy.jpg

tirediron
06-11-2009, 05:02 PM
I like this; I think the image works well 'though I'm not sure a slight boost in contrast would go amiss. You might also consider cloning out the horizontal bit behind the main subject in the upper-right.

kat
06-11-2009, 05:48 PM
I really like this! Love the pattern!!!

Barefoot
06-11-2009, 08:14 PM
I like this; I think the image works well 'though I'm not sure a slight boost in contrast would go amiss. You might also consider cloning out the horizontal bit behind the main subject in the upper-right.

I concur. And now I can call it Fern #2. :headslap:

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg229/BarefootImages/Risized%20Images/DSC_8026k.jpg

Chantelle
06-11-2009, 08:47 PM
I agree Tirediron with all he critiqued, and the second image is definitely better than the first. Nicely fixed up, I like it. :highfive:

Barefoot
06-11-2009, 10:53 PM
I 'preciate that, Chantelle

Marko
06-14-2009, 08:53 AM
Yup T'I's critique and your fix is bang on!

scorpio_e
06-15-2009, 10:37 AM
Ncie work. I liek the edit. The black and white works well.

Mad Aussie
06-15-2009, 02:47 PM
The first thing I thought of was the Pharaohs Air Conditioner.

I like the composition, the spine makes me follow it's path through the photo nicely.

The B&W doesn't work for me though. But then I'm often not impressed with B&W's. I think a subdued colour treatment might have worked better. Just my opinion.

MoinMoin
06-17-2009, 04:24 AM
Pattern and sharpness are great - and the second picture is better.
But I miss the colour - I don't prefer here b & w.

kurtdriver
06-17-2009, 04:46 PM
And now I can call it Fern #2

I thought it might have been a fern, or a vent cover. Very nice lines there but I 'll agree that colour might have been better here. Now you've got me thinking about ferns. Maybe looking down the length, rather than head on? I may have a project.

Barefoot
06-17-2009, 04:56 PM
I thought it might have been a fern, or a vent cover. Very nice lines there but I 'll agree that colour might have been better here. Now you've got me thinking about ferns. Maybe looking down the length, rather than head on? I may have a project.

I like the color, also. I was just looking for something to try a new idea out in post.

Thanks for the positive comment. They're always appreciated.

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg229/BarefootImages/Risized%20Images/DSC_8026c.jpg