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    Sorta at a loss as to what to call this one. Heck, I can’t even tell if it’s a keeper or not.

    Any suggestions?


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    I like this; I think the image works well 'though I'm not sure a slight boost in contrast would go amiss. You might also consider cloning out the horizontal bit behind the main subject in the upper-right.

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    I really like this! Love the pattern!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    I like this; I think the image works well 'though I'm not sure a slight boost in contrast would go amiss. You might also consider cloning out the horizontal bit behind the main subject in the upper-right.
    I concur. And now I can call it Fern #2.

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    I agree Tirediron with all he critiqued, and the second image is definitely better than the first. Nicely fixed up, I like it.

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    I 'preciate that, Chantelle
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    Ncie work. I liek the edit. The black and white works well.
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    The first thing I thought of was the Pharaohs Air Conditioner.

    I like the composition, the spine makes me follow it's path through the photo nicely.

    The B&W doesn't work for me though. But then I'm often not impressed with B&W's. I think a subdued colour treatment might have worked better. Just my opinion.

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    Pattern and sharpness are great - and the second picture is better.
    But I miss the colour - I don't prefer here b & w.

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