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QuisutDeus
01-24-2010, 07:52 PM
This was originally shot in color. I converted it to B/W in PhotoShop Elements. I adjusted the contrast for the clouds and sky. Any constructive criticism would be nice.

casil403
01-24-2010, 07:54 PM
I really like this....the contrasts in the clouds and the whole photo work for me...well done. :)

Mad Aussie
01-24-2010, 08:23 PM
A slightly bigger shot makes it easier for us to critique but this looks good to me as well. Composition looks nice, as does the contrast.

I can only offer a small suggestion I think and that's the composition might have been stronger if you'd have moved to your left and only included about half of the dead tree. I think this would have removed the messy looking lower left part of this shot and created an interesting framing in the process.

Bambi
01-24-2010, 08:33 PM
I would love to see the colour version too!

However, my only addition is that to crop off the bottom part of it to eliminate the roots. When I scroll down it makes it stronger for me.

but that's being nit-picky. I really like it! :clap:

QuisutDeus
01-24-2010, 09:40 PM
I saturated the color photo a little.

Bambi
01-24-2010, 09:54 PM
I agree with you that B&W was the way to go. I think that the crop works too. My only other piece of advice would be to clone the sign out. But nice work!

Mad Aussie
01-24-2010, 09:57 PM
I'm wondering what the sign says now I can see there's a sign in there :)

Generally we find something around the 700 to 800x600 size works well.

JAS_Photo
01-24-2010, 10:18 PM
It's got a real Ansel Adamsy feel to it. :)

Marko
01-25-2010, 10:56 AM
I like this new cropping and prefer the b/W - (nice size).

There's still lots of room here for additional dodging and burning which will help this sing even louder.

Fortytwo
01-26-2010, 02:57 AM
Same for me here, the b&w is much better. :)

sarrasani
01-26-2010, 03:59 PM
a very good 3d sense IMHO, and avery good image.