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This is a discussion on my first photo post within the Show your photo (Color) - Landscape & Nature (flowers, mountains, storms etc.) forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; This was originally shot in color. I converted it to B/W in PhotoShop Elements. I adjusted the contrast for the ...

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    This was originally shot in color. I converted it to B/W in PhotoShop Elements. I adjusted the contrast for the clouds and sky. Any constructive criticism would be nice.
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    I really like this....the contrasts in the clouds and the whole photo work for me...well done.
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    A slightly bigger shot makes it easier for us to critique but this looks good to me as well. Composition looks nice, as does the contrast.

    I can only offer a small suggestion I think and that's the composition might have been stronger if you'd have moved to your left and only included about half of the dead tree. I think this would have removed the messy looking lower left part of this shot and created an interesting framing in the process.

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    I would love to see the colour version too!

    However, my only addition is that to crop off the bottom part of it to eliminate the roots. When I scroll down it makes it stronger for me.

    but that's being nit-picky. I really like it!
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    I saturated the color photo a little.
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    I agree with you that B&W was the way to go. I think that the crop works too. My only other piece of advice would be to clone the sign out. But nice work!
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    I'm wondering what the sign says now I can see there's a sign in there

    Generally we find something around the 700 to 800x600 size works well.

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    It's got a real Ansel Adamsy feel to it.

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    I like this new cropping and prefer the b/W - (nice size).

    There's still lots of room here for additional dodging and burning which will help this sing even louder.
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    Same for me here, the b&w is much better.
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