View Full Version : I'll jump right in

06-19-2008, 04:33 PM
Here is a shot from a recent shoot I did for a friend to present to her husband as a fathers day gift.
I'm very interested in objective critiques and tips for improvement.
Well I don't know why the image isn't showing up but here is the link.http://championphoto.smugmug.com/gallery/5091388_FNhXe#306851431_HoePE-L-LB

06-20-2008, 05:00 PM
Just click e link

06-20-2008, 05:13 PM
I'm not expert in portraiture but the shot looks good

The cutoff arm is distracting.... I might have framed it to include it's whole...

I don't know if this bothers anyone else...

06-20-2008, 05:54 PM
I must agree, I don't mind crops that are not standard but for this one I think the both of them in the frame would work a bit better. The only other issue would be the skin tone seems off just a bit. Outside those two minor issues it is well done, I like the pose, the Bokeh of the background.

06-21-2008, 09:52 AM
thats actually a tight crop the image is backed out quite a bit.
the customers big complaint on this one was the double chin which was a direct result of the poor pose and up angle. my bad