This is a discussion on I'll jump right in within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Here is a shot from a recent shoot I did for a friend to present to her husband as a ...
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Here is a shot from a recent shoot I did for a friend to present to her husband as a fathers day gift.
I'm very interested in objective critiques and tips for improvement.
Well I don't know why the image isn't showing up but here is the link.http://championphoto.smugmug.com/gal...431_HoePE-L-LB
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I'm not expert in portraiture but the shot looks good
The cutoff arm is distracting.... I might have framed it to include it's whole...
I don't know if this bothers anyone else...
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I must agree, I don't mind crops that are not standard but for this one I think the both of them in the frame would work a bit better. The only other issue would be the skin tone seems off just a bit. Outside those two minor issues it is well done, I like the pose, the Bokeh of the background.
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Thanks,
thats actually a tight crop the image is backed out quite a bit.
the customers big complaint on this one was the double chin which was a direct result of the poor pose and up angle. my bad
-Keith
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