https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1922/...6fbeded3_b.jpgquiet zone by Chris Campbell, on Flickr
https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1937/...98507af9_b.jpgtinman by Chris Campbell, on Flickr
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For harsher critiques -
shot 1 - I see the juxtaposition of the sign and the player, but it's too busy IMO.
If it were mine I might crop all the people out on the left all the way to the violinist's back.
shot 2 - also looks too busy for me without a strong enough focal point.
Hope it wasn't too harsh
Not harsh at all, I wasn’t big on these images to begin with. I had a bad day of shooting. I guess out of practice.