The couple

Hey all,
What do you think? Any suggestions?Attachment 9848

This is well done overall Yisehaq and I'm SURE the models will love it. The pose is playful and the models look good. The tones here are lovely.

A couple of points - The girl's eyes look a tad oversharpened to me and it may have been better to include the fingers on the hands.

Hope that helps - Marko

Thanks Marko.

Hmmmm... First off let me say that I think the couple will be very happy with the image, generally it's a good shot. On the forum here though we tend to be very picky on details with a critique. Marko hit the highlights with the oversharpened eyes and the missing appendages and elbow. I would add that the hotspots above her head and to their right are a bit distracting and while I like the general colour tones there's something about her face that feels washed out or flat or something. Sorry, can't describe it well but it's just the feeling I get. All in all, nice work. The obviously relaxed and comfortable pose is worth a lot more than all of those details combined I think.

Thanks a lot.

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Originally Posted by Iguanasan

I like the general colour tones there's something about her face that feels washed out or flat or something. Sorry, can't describe it well but it's just the feeling I get.

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That is one of the issues why I had to post this for critique. I think the lighting was not that good and I have also missed the exposure.

It's a very good picture, but it seems to be a picture of a woman with a man, i.e. the woman dominates the picture. However, I still like the picture, your treatment of it works very well.

Thanks Cadellin,

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Originally Posted by Cadellin

it seems to be a picture of a woman with a man, i.e. the woman dominates the picture.

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You've nailed it on the head. The man was a bit reluctant, but the boss's order had to be followed.