These are a little better than my first ones I posted (IMO), my brother and niece
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todd2a by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr
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todd1a by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr
2 is fantastic. I think 1 is a bit to far off to the side. If it's cropped, pull out until there is an equal gap between the sides and body contact and see what it looks like.
Colour, poses, light, it's all looking good. Well done! By the way, how do you two guys get so lucky as to be surrounded with such beautiful girls? :)
I like shot 2 here.
Shot 1 has that over processed look...that imo draws attention to itself.
I agree with Marko. Think of the Dove commercials when you are processing and let the natural beauty show through. She's a cutie and looks awesome in shot two as she's very relaxed and comfortable but shot one makes her look a bit plastic as she's in an uncomfortable pose and a little over processed.