Light trail laptop

I took a few pictures today. One is my roof, I just snapped it out of my window. The other is a long exposure of my laptop while panning. The last one is a long exposure down a dark hallway. Long exposures are very pleasing to me because of the lighting. I think they turned out well. Critiques?

http://img27.picoodle.com/img/img27/...4m_1bbb5fb.jpg

http://img36.picoodle.com/img/img36/...ym_6efc29b.jpg

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/...4m_544ab93.jpg

Hmmm,

Tough one. The middle shot is the most interesting shot to me because of the repeating pattern.

The hallway is not a bad shot...but it's just a hallway right?

The panning shot is just way too abstarct for me without lots of colour or some other dynamic element.

Hope that wasn't too harsh.

Marko

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Originally Posted by marko

Hmmm,

Tough one. The middle shot is the most interesting shot to me because of the repeating pattern.

The hallway is not a bad shot...but it's just a hallway right?

The panning shot is just way too abstarct for me without lots of colour or some other dynamic element.

Hope that wasn't too harsh.

Marko

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Don't worry about being to harsh on me. That's the only way I'm going to learn what's good and what's boring. Critisism is always welcome. :)