My daughter

She was playing model for me for some shoots
http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/w.../nadine2-1.jpg

http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/w...r/Nadine-1.jpg

The first one is great! Nice job! Just be careful not to cut off the feet.

Very cool! The feet thing is something I have to be careful to avoid too.

The first shot is a cool one ;-). But on the second one she looks a bit sad. I smile would be nicer :-).

It may be just my monitor, but I'm not seeing any detail in the coat in #1. #2 is nicely done, aside from her already noted expression, but I would consider adding an extra speedlight to your lighting arrangment to produce some catchlights, since as-is, her eyes are rather flat and lifeless.

I love the first one. Nice job on the lighting and her pose:)

Thanks :)