First Collage

Recommendations welcome.

My first collage

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2535/...fd86e556_o.jpg

As a collage I'm not sure it's having enough impact, though I do like the shot at bottom right.

The shots for themselfs are good. Maybe you should put some space between the four pictures? And this one with the text should not be on the right side. Isn't it the left one the side leading your eyes into the picture?

All great comments !!
Thanks :)

I think the shots themselves are very nice. The collage itself doesn't appeal though. There's really no creativity in that. Borders, tilting. sacrificial images underneath etc might all be worth exploring for this.