Now that I'm at home with a 'real' monitor, I'll give you maybe 1/3 stop on her right shoulder and edge of her hair, but it's pretty darn close.
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I'll match your 1/3 stop and go for 1/2 stop in the hair and 1/3 in the dress and hand! ;)
She wants critical ... she's doing an advanced course :)
Yea, she's a hard person to get to smile and make it look natural rather than being put on.
I too like the concept in shot 1 but not necessarily the pose.
Like T.I., I would have liked to have seen the reflection tack sharp or much softer.
The shot does seem slightly overexposed in the hair in particular.
For me the very first thing I noticed was the lack of professional wedding make-up. She has noticeable bags under her eyes. Hope that helps - Marko
Nice picture, the first picture there is a problem there. She haz ANTENNA
The second picture is a bit toooo tight otherwise is great.