Thanks in advance, again.
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Thanks in advance, again.
A nice idea. I like the patterns and repeating lines, but there a couple of issues: (1) I would much prefer to see it composed either much more tightly on the concrete, or taken from a position much further to the left (if possible).
The main concern however are all of the branches and leaves which 'confuse' the eye. This one definitely needs to be revisited. Keep up the good work.
I don't mind this composition aside from the dead branches in the foreground which I find distracting. You may not have had any choice in the matter though.
The blue in the fog is interesting. Doesn't look right somehow ... fog is usually grey-ish.
There's some quite stark divisions between the bright parts and shadows on the bridge ... this might suggest a suitable shot for B&W.