Finally got a Good Christmas Portrait of my Daughters

[theantiquetiger]

I want to thank Vyeko for this post edit, it came out amazing!!!

[Mad Aussie]

I want to thank Vyeko for this post edit, it came out amazing!!!

I think you can see now how bad the original actually was. It is far from a good shot. The composition setup is nice though and the girls poses are great, good smiles etc.
Exposure wise though I've seen much better from you.

I think you should stop spending money on things like umbrella's and get a decent monitor and calibrator. Using more equipment badly isn't going to help you. Getting the basics right first is the key.