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Second set in Mandalay, gold leaf making!
(1)
http://www.artphotoasia.net/_sharing_2/_MG_12340.jpg
(2)
http://www.artphotoasia.net/_sharing_2/_MG_12341.jpg
(3)
http://www.artphotoasia.net/_sharing_2/_MG_12343.jpg
(4)
http://www.artphotoasia.net/_sharing_2/_MG_12349.jpg
(5)
http://www.artphotoasia.net/_sharing_2/_MG_12352.jpg
Comments and critiques always welcomed...
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Mandalay
Love that last shot APA.
I love the whole set but that last one really stands out to me.
By far, Composition is tightest on that last shot - my fave as well. Love that you caught the monk in mid step as well as the colours as well as the juxtaposition of old and modern.
I agree with the others though - the whole set is interesting.
Shot 1 is also quite cool. If there was a figure in the upper window it would have worked better.....hmmm I might crop it all off just below the sign. That way my eye stays glued to the workers....but I cannot be sure.
- the window might imply something. What do you think? What do others think (if I may be so bold APA)?
Hope that may help.
Liking all of these APA. As to Markos suggested crop, I would be tempted to crop just below the centre window, and a tad from the right to exclude the door.