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    you're just another brick in the wall.

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    Lovely concept Lorey.
    Not crazy about the exposure or the PP though. There are joints in the brick that are nearly clipped. The top left bricks are stealing the show, that shadow is nearly washed out...and yet, "...the show must go ooooooooooooooooooooon...."
    (I'm guessing 10 minutes of pp (burn joints, increase contrast on shadowed man by a good 50-60% and increase contrast overall ) could make this sing much louder.
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    I quite like it. I think, with Marko's suggestions I would love it.
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    Thanks Bambi and Marko! Well I'm much slower in PS than you, Marko. It was a bit more than 10 minutes and I'm still not sure I correctly caught your vision... but maybe somewhere along this line? Feel free to tweak it to your liken's if it's not exactly what you had in mind.

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    I quite like now. In the first post I have to admit I didn't even catch the shadow. Just thought of it as a picture of a brick wall. Now that the shadow stands out it is cool.

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    Really like the concept here Lorey, and that second edit works sooooo much better.
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