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This is a discussion on Back to School within the Black and White - Monochrome/Monotone - photography forum forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Greetings guys Back to school time is just around the corner...two weeks and counting. C&C appreciated as well. Thanks in ...

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    Greetings guys

    Back to school time is just around the corner...two weeks and counting.

    C&C appreciated as well.

    Thanks in advance guys

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    Nice BW and processing here and good overall composition! You have eliminated distractions - nicely done.

    My main niggle here would be the lack of interaction between between subject and viewer and that we don't see enough of her face. For me, it makes this a very casual (though nicely done) portrait instead of an engaging portrait if that makes sense.

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    Very nice. She looks like she's totally engrossed in her work.

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