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Two Old girls and Their Beau

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    I really like the comp and the juxtaposition of the new and old. I do find it just a tad flat or perhaps a bit underexposed.

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    The back lighting was tricky with the building on the right being too bright and the other two being back lit only. Here is a re-edit:



    The Two Grande Dames re-edit
    by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography, on Flickr

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    I like the re-edit. Much better in my opinion.

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    Thanks, asnow, the first edit was definitely not my best work.

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