Heated (Nudity)

[kat]

This is a long shutter shot, moving from once position to another. I know there is lots wrong with the photo..the obvious slant of the whole photo is huge. And the crop is off on the left head.

I want to redo this. I want to be more face on to the camera (with help to move furniture to do it haha). But I would appreciate more in depth tips please!!! I'd like to give this one more go and that be it (crossing fingers) as it's a long process with the slow shutter.

Should there be more visible movement between the two positions? Longer stays in those positions.. is the fireplace just too distracting?

Thank you for any input! kat