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    This was taken at Frank Ghery's Seattle music hall of fame. Very impresive building skin that is very suggestive to our cultural perception of technology.
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    Nice capture!

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    Oooh very nice. Interesting lines and curves

    I might burn in the bright area at the mid top edge and dodge the highlight on the rounded part in the middle part of the image.

    aside from that....very nice capture!
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    Ace!

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    Thanks for the suggestions Marko... I can see what you mean, this definitely brings the 'wing' into the foreground. Is this what you see?

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    Oooh very nice. Interesting lines and curves

    I might burn in the bright area at the mid top edge and dodge the highlight on the rounded part in the middle part of the image.

    aside from that....very nice capture!
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    Nice colors, shapes and lines.

    One thing though, it feels kinda chaotic and wont let my eyes rest. Might be because the center of the lines is in the center of the picture, you could try to crop it a bit. Another idea could be to introduce some more sky or maybe an angle which would give the eyes something to follow.

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    Yep - I'm in agreement with Fante's suggestions...

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