The Words Dont Fit The Picture

I was walking around down town and came across this display out front of the Vancouver Public Library. Please let me know how I can improve please.

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Cool sign!!
When there are words in the picture, the shot is usually about the words...so If it were mine I'd take the humourous approach and crop just a bit into the words so that it literally does not fit the picture.
I'd also burn in the top part and up the contrast overall. Just my 2 cents - Hope that helps - Marko

Marko - Thanks for the thoughts. I have re-cropped the photos (below). Where can I find the legendary Marko's Podcasts?
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I think I would crop on the right side as well. That building is a distraction.

If I cropped the right side I think that I would lose the feel of the building to which this display is located. The Library in the background has been used for a couple movies including an Arnold Swareneger film.

My pleasure mcopan and i like your crop.
The legendary podcasts :cool: are located in the link that says Photography blog and podcast at the top of every page - doh! :D
Here's the direct link to just the podcasts Photography Podcasts | Photography podcast blog and forum - Photography.ca

best! Marko

Thanks Marko. I should really look around the site before I ask a directory question....:)