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    I really like the 3 levels of colour and depth you've created with the sky, field and grass. If the sky was totally blue it would have been just that touch better I feel.
    I'm trying to decide if I would have placed the pole there or not. I think I'd have framed it a bit closer to the left side of the photo myself.
    This is a rather mundane subject made more interesting by the elements you've included and excluded. Nice.

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    I tend to agree with MA's thoughts on this one.
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    Thanks Iggy and MA for the comments. I got the same input from another forum. This is crop from a larger picture so I was able to move the pole over to the left. I agree with all on placing it to the left. This is a much better image than what it was. Thanks again!

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    nice changes Lorey! Much more powerful this way! (no pun intended, really :P)
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    I think the second one is much improved.

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