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    Clevedon Pier at high tide.

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    Lovely shot. Really like the pastel colouring, and the jet-stream following the line of the pier!

    There's a small distraction at the bottom of shot ... a vertical white thing that I'd clone out or remove somehow.

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    well done and well made.

    ditto on the white stick/stem
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    And, really, from a technical standpoint that's about all there is to worry about. Another option might be to clone out the ship. Since it's a minimalist type image of the pier then I think the pier should be the only thing in the shot. Other than those nit picky things this is an excellent image.
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    Thanks for the kind comments.

    Iggy - if the ship had been in the B&W I posted I probably would have taken it out, but in this one it feels ok

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    Quote Originally Posted by taffy View Post
    Thanks for the kind comments.

    Iggy - if the ship had been in the B&W I posted I probably would have taken it out, but in this one it feels ok

    Cheers
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    Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying it HAS to come out. But you posted an otherwise excellent image for critique so I felt I had to say something about it and if there was anything at all that I would change it would be that. (and that white bit on the bottom).
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