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Absolutely lovely, Bambi. Nicely done.
Not too sure what to offer. The B&W conversion is very strong.
I am left feeling a little like the leaves to the right are simply clipped and not actually cropped though. I think they either needed to be included fully or cropped a lot more harshly.
This is really a good study in B&W, very strong. I like the DoF used, back lighting and your comp, as to cropping I think it may improve it slightly- if you were to tighten up the right hand side of the frame with out losing the bottom two leaves.
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Oh, I didn't realize it was the critique forum. That's what I get for just clicking the "new" button. I still think it's lovely but to make it even nicer I would definitely crop in. Say about this much...
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Good BW conversion, but I have to say that I think this would be better in colour and with a shorter dof. I feel the background, especially on the left, is a bit overpowering. I also agree with Marko about the leaves to the right.
thanks all. MA- you are right- it was clipped not cropped.I will redo.
Thoughton- I do have the colour version (same dof though) but I do believe the b&w is stronger:
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