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This is a discussion on Pier Sunset within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Our local landmark, Clevedon Pier. Comments welcome. Taffy...

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    Our local landmark, Clevedon Pier.

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    Critiquing this is nearly impossible for me ... it's awesome as is.

    I could only suggest that getting a bit more in frame (wider angle or walking back a bit) might have given us more of that sky. Other than that weak offer ... I got nothing!

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    Agree with MA. Awesome shot. I really love the colour.

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    simply a beautiful shot, very well made!!
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    If you want real critique you have to start making mistakes! This is wonderful, print and frame!
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    Thanks for all your kind comments!

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    Beautiful image Taffy. Well done. All of the elements work well within the composition and it's terrific eye candy. The big rock in the left-hand corner seems to anchor the viewer who's then absorbed by the smaller pebbles, soft colours and nice pier architecture.

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    Thanks Northstone

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    Very nice indeed. Calendar material

    Like Aussie I'm struggling to critique it. Perhaps a slightly lower shooting angle from a bit further left, to minimize the distance between the pier and that foreground rock, and also to get the foreground rock higher up in the frame and closer to the left thirds line, and include more of the sky.
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