Block & Cleaver

[Greg_R]

I'd go with the idea that the building is not level

I like the sepia toning and the repeating pattern. the reflection is a nice surprise too
my nit is that the right of the sign is cut off

Thanks Bambi. It was a tough shot to set up for. It's along a row of several stores and shops and I didn't want edge of the next building creeping into the frame. I'll play with the crop a bit and see what I can do.

[Marko]

I quite like this. I agree w/AT about the top leveling, it's a distraction to my eye.
I really dig the sepia treatment here, but I find the contrast could be upped for more pop. I don't see enough pure white or pure black here.

[Gremlich]

I think a reflection of Godzilla/Gojira vice the rotunda would make this a nice whimsical photo.

But, I digress. Clone the left-most window contents into the right one, fiddle with it a little to make it unique. Drop the vignette and level the horizontal out, maybe boost the structure a little. Brighten (or bump the exposure a tad) and a little back to more B&W vice so much sepia. Figure out a way to bring attention to the colour runs below the lettering, perhaps (just a thought, though)

[Greg_R]

Thanks for all the input, I really appreciate it. I've tried to incorporate as much as I could - here is the revised image. I opted to leave the reflection in the window as the girlfriend likes it...and well, she wins .

[thoughton]

Nice shot. I agree with your girlfriend, the reflection should stay. (It's always wise to agree with your girlfriend )

You can fix the top in LR by using the Horizontal perspective slider under the 'Manual' section of the Lens Correction panel. By the looks of things just a +1 or +2 will do it. This will also skew the bottom slightly, so you'll have to re-rotate a little afterwards.

[Bambi]

your girlfriend is right! Of course she, -she's a girl.

I like your edits very much. good job

[Greg_R]

Nice shot. I agree with your girlfriend, the reflection should stay. (It's always wise to agree with your girlfriend )

You can fix the top in LR by using the Horizontal perspective slider under the 'Manual' section of the Lens Correction panel. By the looks of things just a +1 or +2 will do it. This will also skew the bottom slightly, so you'll have to re-rotate a little afterwards.

Thanks thoughton...I've been trying to figure out how to change the perspective in LR (I've only learned through playing with it, no one around here offers a course...I'd be the first to sign up if they did!).