Good or Bad

[Sean]

Hi All,

I got such good feedback on the last photo, I thought I'd try it again.

Presented this image at my local camera club, and got really polarized reviews. Some liked it, others were polite.

Details
- Macro lens
- 1 second exposure, manually triggering the flash while the shutter is open
- 100 mm focal length
- f 6.3
- ISO 100

What do I do to the image to make this image more universally appealing.

Thanks,

Sean