Hello Marko, Belliveau
Thanks for your comments it is appreciated and I think you found the answer I was looking for "The Focal Point".
When I saw this scene in Shanghai I was like WOW because for me I liked the neon lights, tower, the people and wanted to capture that but like you said there's to much going on and it would be better if there was a point that draws you in.This is something that occurs a lot in my photography and would be good for me to look at the rule of thirds again,I did learn at college about the rule of thirds but never quite got my head round it.
Anyhow till next time I consider this case closed.
Thanks Again
Paul