PLEASE CRITIQUE - Picture with Santa re-edit

[theantiquetiger]

I am thinking about using this as Christmas cards. I have worked it over and over so many times, I just don't even see it anymore. I like the "pencil drawing" feel to it, but want other's opinions. I can easily get rid of the red frame, etc. I tried forever to get color in both of their faces. I would get one, the other would fade. This was as close as I could get.