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Last edited by theantiquetiger; 12-25-2012 at 09:02 PM.
Love the expressions here and dig the comp - beautiful family!
Skin tones are quite good here to my eye, if I'm getting real picky, all 3 faces could be brightened by 5-10% but their tone looks decent.
Sharpness wise though - this image is a bit soft. Hopefully it is because you uploaded at more than 275k (and the softness is due to compression) - but I'm not convinced this is the case.
What was the focal length and the shutter speed here?
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Cool- you are right, much better.
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"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
Looks like a good balance between foreground and background. The background has a nice amount of blur too. If I had to nit pick I would say soften the light a smidge. All things being said, this is a very good photo.
Yes, this looks much better! It's going in the family album, right?![]()
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