I need some PP critiquing - Wife and Daughters

[theantiquetiger]

The portrait is for my Mother in Law.

My wife's cleavage went about four inches below where it is now, I did a lot of cloning of the shirt.

Anything I am missing?

maddymorganstacy by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr


Second re-touch. Does the wood above Maddy's hair look bad(black hair)?


maddy morgan stacy redo2 by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr


And FYI, here is the RAW version (untouched, only converted to jpeg). As you can see, my wife originally didn't like this one because of her cleavage showing. It was my wife's idea to add a tooth to Morgan.


maddy morgan stacy original by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr