Mars-like Surface (II)

[Gem]

So at MA's goading, I'm putting them up here! Critique away!

[Mad Aussie]

So at MA's goading, I'm putting them up here! Critique away!

Well ... the first one's crap

But the 2nd one's very appealing for it great use of light and shadow. Furthermore, you've captured the texture of the sand very nicely as well which helps to make this photo stand well above the other.
I like the way the ridges 'walk' our eyes along the scene.

The 1st photo (the crap one ) is too out of focus for my liking and general composition seems lacking any specific meaning also.

So ... Nice job not making both crap there Gem

[Mad Aussie]

How's that?

[tomorrowstreasures]

the first one looks like MA was stomping around LOL

[Gem]

MA: Hurtful

Lol. No, it's not. Thanks for the feedback. By out of focus, did you mean there's no focus in general or that it's actually out of focus (not sharp)?

Oh, I thought I should point out that it's snow, not sand. Kinda hard to tell cause of the B&W, I guess.

TT: LOL

[Mad Aussie]

I wondered if it was snow due to the sparkly bits in the first shot.

Yes, I meant that it's not sharp enough for my liking.

However, if it was meant to look like it was taken by a small spaceship , thousands of miles away then well done ... it does

And I do really think that 2nd shot is a winner.

[Gem]

I wondered if it was snow due to the sparkly bits in the first shot.

Yes, I meant that it's not sharp enough for my liking.

However, if it was meant to look like it was taken by a small spaceship , thousands of miles away then well done ... it does

And I do really think that 2nd shot is a winner.

I get what you're saying now. It mostly caught my eye cause of the pattern. Oh well, not every one can be a winner