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    Raiven, I love it! I like the tones and the contrast.
    Maybe less foreground and more sky? Maybe increase the vignetting in the bottom corners to even things up? But these are only things I might try and see if it looks better.

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    I really wanted to try out having all that walkway in there due to the geometric design, the vignetting I can try to adjust. This is a popular walkway and part of the bicycle trails so the vignetting was in part to 'disappear' the people to some extent. LOl.

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    It's a man made object ... I wouldn't be too worried about people in the shot personally.

    It's a bit centred at first glance, but the angle of the trees and the leading lines of the pavement seem to make the composition work I think.

    The colours/tones and vignetting doesn't do anything for me I'm afraid. But that's just me. I tend to be drawn to colour most often.

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    I like the image, but I'd really like to see the lamp standard image right disapear.

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    Well done Raiven! I agree with Tirediron and would also remove the debris from the sidewalk on 2 corners of the big square to the left and the bit at the bottom left.

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