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This is a discussion on CBD Language within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; OK, go easy please I've very, very new to photography and am really just feeling out what style I like.....

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    OK, go easy please I've very, very new to photography and am really just feeling out what style I like..


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    Welcome; an interesting image; my main comment would be that I think the image would be better served by by composing more of the graffitti wall and less of the remainder of the alley, which doesn't add a lot of interest to the image.

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    I agree with TI

    That bright part of the photo where the sun slams that wall is simply a distraction from your subject. Cropping this shot down to eliminate that would certainly strengthen the image.

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    tirediron, Mad Aussie - Thanks guys, after studying the image further, I can see your points.. It's not a great shot to begin with, which doesn't help Thanks again!

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    You'll learn quickly around here. A great range of experience, opinions and viewpoints to garnish

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    For some positives, I like the Depth of Field(a bit deeper may have been better). If there was something interesting down the alley it would have been a slightly better composition, or if the person was some how related like if they were the "artists".

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