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    My first attempt to shoot at the beach.. The subject was back lit by the sun and I used a one light high and off to the right. I wanted to give it a little drama. Are the shadows too distracting and harsh?

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    I think overall it looks great. Great looking skin, hair away from the face, shadows aren't covering the eyes. It would be nice to see her whole right arm.

    Does she box?
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    Thanks for you input Kat
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    No not real boxing. She works out with the gloves in a gym though.
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    It's not the shadows that are distracting

    Now you mention it ... I think the shadows are perfect. Nice use of fill flash by the looks of it. We expect to see shadows on a beach so hiding them steals realism.

    I think it's excellent work and you did ok too scorpio e

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    It's not the shadows that are distracting
    As a photographer, we must learn to deal with distractions


    Thanks for the comments !!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    It's not the shadows that are distracting

    Now you mention it ... I think the shadows are perfect. Nice use of fill flash by the looks of it. We expect to see shadows on a beach so hiding them steals realism.

    I think it's excellent work and you did ok too scorpio e
    MA, your hilarious. I wanted to type the very same comment but was afraid I might offend . The photo is excellent!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kat View Post
    It would be nice to see her whole right arm.
    I agree with Kat on this, but it is still a great shot.

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    Nice work!

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