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    Here's another I'm offering up for some critique... I haven't posted here for a while so I thought I would submit some photos for thoughts, comments and suggestions on how to better improve. Thanks as always
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    Poor daisy doesn't look like you waited until it woke up properly!

    It looks a little underexposed to me. Great bokeh though.

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    You should follow MA's hint and take a new shot with more light. You could get a much brighter picture.

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    I agree that it could be a bit brighter. I quite like the shallow DOF, but maybe one more stop would get the whole flower. I like the composition and bokeh very much.

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    I took these in auto bracket so is this a bit better IYO? I'll go back and give it another go this evening.
    Thanks for the advice...
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    I think the second image is better but it still lacks a little punch with the colors.

    Love the bokeh!!!!!!!!!!
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