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    Default Focussing on the eyes...

    Found this one fun.

    Joshua is doing a u-turn after realizing that this leaf of Telekia was not a way out. I kept the telekia in the background.

    Distraction or enhancement? your's to tell.

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    I like the background colour especially with the soft bokeh. The hair or whatever it is, is a bit of a distraction. The overall composition is good.

    It looks like you got some motion blur along an antenna...on a snail or maybe its just because the antenna is a little translucent?

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    I like the shot and the background. I would have liked to have seen the shell a wee bit sharper though.
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    Enhancement for sure.

    Love the motion blur on a snail. How many people are capable of that!!! Nice.

    Agree the 'hair' is distracting though.

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