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Waiting for the ride

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    Before flying over Dubai for some shots, while i was waiting for Helicopter...
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    I think it's neat concept. Like the treatment. The composition is pretty good too!

    My concern is the helicopter being a bit too much out of focus and/or just a tad bit white (blown out). Just a bit more detail in it.

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    Hmmm... I'm afraid I really get nothing from this image. I think there's a good idea here, but the execution isn't working. I would like to see it levelled and with more DoF. I think the OOF background is a good idea, but as-is, it's too out of focus.

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