Portraiture trail

[Yisehaq]

Dear All,
As usual your C&C is awaited eagerly.

[casil403]

To be honest, I find the background slightly distracting (my eye wants to go to the background first instead of to the model) and the portrait lacks sharpness and is also a bit dark IMO.

[tirediron]

For what it is and where it is (A capture at some sort of event) it's very good, but as a portrait proper, there are a few areas for improvement as Casil has mentioned. The model has very striking hair, and an amazing smile; there are some huge possibilities here. If possible try and get her back for a "real" portrait session, and select a simpler background. You'll also need reflectors to provide some extra illumination on the face as her hair is so thick that it loses detail.

[kat]

Love her hair. A little bit of light to her eyes would imo, make her glow. Right now I find them hard to see.

[jlabel]

Oh no teeth she scares little childrens.

[Yisehaq]

Thank you all for your comments. I will try to work with her one of these days.