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    Default Fun with Bubbles!

    Hey everyone,
    Here's 2 images of Lauren, my model on tuesday night, what do you think? Which seems to be most appealing?

    Image1 - Lauren trying to head butt the bubble


    Image2 - Lauren blowing the bubbles up in the air

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    I like number 2 better because there appears to be more interaction. The bubble in #1 is too far back. It would have been better if she was facing it in that one.
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    The first one has a certain mystery to it, the way she's regarding it. Almost looks as if she's trying to read her thoughts. The second I don't know about, I don't really care for it too much, I am not sure why. The first is quite good.

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    I like the model's expression in the first but I do not find the overall pose that complimentary to the model. I like the second one better overall. I think maybe your highlight on the models right shoulder might be a tad too strong but the light on the hair on top and in the back looks very nice. Overall it's a very nice portrait I think with really beautiful skin tones.

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    Wonderful idea. I like here the second photo best because of it's softer tone/light. At the first pictures the model's silhouette is too sharp and looks a bit unnatural.

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    Thanks for all your critques. Here's another from the same collection, she's facing towards this one, like this one better Iguanasan?


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    I like shot 3 the best, then 2, then 1 based primarily on the interaction with the bubble. Even though I like shot 3 best, I find the backlighting on the hair a bit too harsh. Hope that helps - Marko
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