Hey everyone, last tuesday night, we did a semi-nude shoot with my photography course, would just like some feedback on these images:
Image 1 Colour/Black and White
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Image 2 Colour/Black and White
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Image 3 Colour/Black and White
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Hey everyone, last tuesday night, we did a semi-nude shoot with my photography course, would just like some feedback on these images:
Image 1 Colour/Black and White
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Image 2 Colour/Black and White
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Image 3 Colour/Black and White
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I think they are great images. To critique the images here would not really be a critique on your part but a critique on the model. Clearly she is very attractive, but those poses just do not seem to be working for me. I think the images themselves are great. Good job on your part, but just dont feel the poses are very great. I prefer discrete nudity where as this seems to be very direct. Not that it never works, I just do not think that is the case here. Maybe you could have tried a couple different angles???? Just a few thoughts and my cheap opinions. You asked for them!
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28054853@N08/
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Couldn't do a hell of a lot with angles, the light is coming from the back left corner onto her, therefore I couldn't really change the angle of the image, if I got down on the ground, her head would have looked too small.
Purhapse you like these better?
Colour and Black and White versions
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My fav are the first set. Love the lines in it!
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I really liked the first n second black and white option, since it gives a bit of movie mood
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