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    Hi everyone, I'd love to know your opinion of this shot. These are the settings I used.
    Shutter: 1/750
    Aperture: f/6.7
    ISO Speed: 400

    Any suggestions or critiques would be appreciated!
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    I like this picture, i miss wow factor tho.

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    I love the exposure here. Just enough detail in the darks left but a nice shadowy feel as the light hits. The starburst works nicely too.
    Composition wise, if there was room, I would have included more water and the boats reflection and less sky I think. Although the sky has great character I think the boats reflection would have been more of interest here.
    I also would have (IF I'd noticed it through the eye piece) moved a little to the left and recomposed again to separate that beautifully backlit flag from the brightly lit building in the background.

    Apart from that it's a really nice shot! Crisp!

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    I really like this as well, one thing that bothers me though is the structure on the left by the flag, my eyes are really drawn to it but I can't make out what it actually is. Thumbs up on the clouds, very dramatic.

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    Thanks for the tip on the building guys. One of those things that I didn't even notice. That's what's great about this critique thread. I'm going to see what cloning it out might do. Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
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    OK, here's an version without the building

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    Well that does remove the distraction

    I liked the building though ... just not competing with the flag.

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