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**Chantelle** · 11-02-2009, 08:33 PM

Yet another of my portraits, this one was taken with some off-camera flash, what do you think?

This one without flash

**tirediron** · 11-02-2009, 08:48 PM

Good job! Subjects with darker skin tones can be tough. I prefer the exposure in #2 over #1 as her face seems just a bit bright.

**Greg_Nuspel** · 11-02-2009, 10:59 PM

I find the colour off on the second shot, but it is the more pleasing pose.

**EJC** · 11-03-2009, 12:06 AM

I agree with Greg. The second pose is quite pleasing but her skin appears pasty and the other colours are a little subdued. Maybe there is a flash/shade/colour balance issue. The models skin tone are a little better in the 1st picture which may be more sun lit.

**Mad Aussie** · 11-03-2009, 03:08 AM

I like shot 1. Looks nice and bright.
Shot 2 has a blue/green cast and looks underexposed to me.

**Chantelle** · 11-03-2009, 04:22 AM

Yea I noticed the pasty look too, didn't have much time to play with it this morning, I'll have another play with shot 2 and see if I can fix it up

Thanks for your comments!

**scorpio_e** · 11-03-2009, 11:24 AM

I like the first one the best. The hair on her should is a little distracting. She has weight of her body on her right arm which makes the top of her arm look heavy.. Just my opinion

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